Showing posts with label week 5. Show all posts
Showing posts with label week 5. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Week 5 Story: The Ghostly Replacement




Close to a ghost wife
image by Lina Blixt


There once lived a man names Spencer and his wife Angelica . They lived in a small house in the mountains with the man's sister Ashley. The Spencer’s sister was always picky about the women he brought home and knew everything about Angelica before he married her.

One day Angelica went down to a small stream that was near their house. On the way she brushed the side of a ghost that had stumbled across the path she would normally take. The ghost took offense to this and took the form of angelica. The ghost then came up behind Angelica right before she reached the stream and took her to nearby tree and buried her next to it. The ghost buried her alive with a hole to breath, for it wanted to make her suffer for touching it without permission. From here the ghost returned back to the house and took Angelica's position.

The ghost did the normal chores around the house that Angelica used to do but more efficiently. Spencer didn’t notice any difference for he was not there during the day when these things were normally done. Ashley on the other hand noticed for she knew the normal routines of Angelica. She had suspicions that is was not Angelica. So after three days she gave the ghost a task that Angelica could normally not do alone to see if she would do it. The ghost of course did it with ease.
Ashley needed more so later that night when Spencer arrived home she told him what happened. Spencer said that this was impossible but listened to his sister. So that evening they both decided to spy on Angelica cooking dinner, which she had finished early the last three days. When they looked in the kitchen they saw Angelica cooking, but she had six arms.
Without thought Spencer jumped out and yell, ”You are not my wife. Where is my wife.”
The ghost was astonished but did what was asked of it.
The ghost took Spencer and his sister to where it had buried Angelica. When arriving and unearthing Angelica they found her in a state of dehydration but otherwise unharmed. They asked why the ghost had done this to Angelica. The ghost explained that it used to be a housewife and when Angelica brushed it the creature became enraged for it used to have the same lifestyle. It wanted to take her place while Angelica suffered in loneliness as it had.

After hearing this all three of them felt pity for the ghost. So instead of sending it on its way they invited the ghost to come live with them as long as it promised to help with the daily chores. The ghost liked this offer and agreed. After this they all lived as one big happy family in the house.

Author notes: the source story is “The Ghost Wife”. In the story there is a man, his wife, and his mother. The wife goes on a late night walk and ran across the ghost that stuffed her in a tree truck and took her place. The mother notices that the wife was not the same and realized it was a ghost. They call in a exorcist to get rid of the evil. In the end they get the ghost to tell him where his wife is and send the ghost away.



bibliography: source story and author: The Ghost wife by the Rev. Lal Hehari Day

Reading notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Bengali Folktales, part B

Seems fitting for a Ghost Wife 

The story that I found most interesting today was “The Ghostly Wife”. The story itself was short and kind of bland but what makes it fun for me is, It is a story I can spice up and make better in my opinion. I will first change one of the characters. I would change the mother to a sister, for my sister is always judging and females I bring around. I will change what the ghost does with the wife for stuffing her into a tree seems very simple. Burying her and saying that she has no chance of survival seems more appropriate. Yes, I know this is very dark. I will also change some of the other things that are noticed in the story that brings them to the conclusion that she is a ghost. I may also change the ending to where she curses the family or house for she wants to stay. I could also make it to where they live with the live happily with the ghost in the end and the ghost provides them help with the special powers that she has. The story seemed simple but I will give it the set up and plot i think it deserves.

Bibliography:Bengali Folktales by the Rev. Lal Behari Day

Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Reading notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Bengali Folktales, part A

a siren attracting a man
by John William Waterhouse 

The stories presented this week were very interesting. What I have gained from previous weeks is I will choose my favorite part of a story or single story from the reading and give note on what I will do with it from now on.  My favorite this week was The Boy whom Seven Mothers Suckled. The story was easy to read so I will not change the language of the story. I will adjust the story by giving it an actual setting. The original story doesn't really give a setting other than they are in a kingdom and then the boy goes to Rakshasi lands. I would add detail of where the kingdom is and where in the kingdom the scenes of the story take place. The story just used vague detail such as the other side to the ocean. I would say what ocean. I would add detail to keep the setting I would keep the story pretty similar but maybe throw in plot twist. First I would have the boy kill the mother of the Rakshasi to prevent her from taking revenge. I would also maybe make it have a twist of an ending where the king realizes it is his son and helps to kill the rakshasi who had blinded him for so long. I could also change the creature that she is while still keeping the plot in tact. I could make here a siren who eats men that has wooed the king in an enchanting human form. These are the things i would choose to do to make this story my own. If I find a better story in the part b I will adjust the notes to fit that for part b.

Bibliography:Bengali Folktales by the Rev. Lal Behari Day