Showing posts with label week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label week 6. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 26, 2018

Week 6 Story: The Man Who Looked for His Luck

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There once were two brothers. One of them was a successful business man while the other was barely making it by, paycheck to paycheck. One day while visiting the office building his brother works in looking for a job he stopped by to see his brother in his office. When he opened the door to the office he saw a man sitting there doing paper work that was not his brother. He has asked, “Who are you?”
The man relied “I am your brother luck.”
Then the brother asked, “If you are my brother luck, what are you doing here?”
He responded, “I do your brother harder paper work to keep him ahead in the game of business.”
The brother thought a moment then ask, “Where his luck was?”
To this he responded, “He is resting in a hotel.”
The man demanded to know where the hotel was, and the luck told him where the hotel was. The brother set off to find his luck. On his way he cam across a man crying. He inquired why the man was crying. The man explained that he did not have enough money to open his business. So the brother told the man once he finds his luck he will ask a way to get the money.
Next the brother came across a chef siting in front of his restaurant looking sad. He asked the chef why he was sad. The chef replied that he had not had a customer in many days. Thinking about this the brother said he would inquire his luck on why this was.
Along the way the brother saw a man in a black suit. He looked frustrated and the brother asked why? The man explained his assassin’s business was not taking off. To this the brother responded I will ask my luck for you.
Finally, he found the hotel and entered to find his luck sleeping on a couch. He woke his luck. He asked why he was not with him and it replied that he was not to wake for a few more years. The luck asked him to leave until then, but the brother wouldn’t until he answered his questions about the situation of the men he met along the way.
To this the luck responded, “For the man who wants a business tell him to get a loan. For the chef, tell him to make food people like not just food that he liked. Finally, for the assassin, tell him to take a contract out on a fool to gain credit.”
After hearing these answers, the brother left his luck. First, he inquires the man who wanted to open a business. He told him to get a loan from a bank. The man thanked the brother and asked if he would be his partner, but the brother declined for he had answers for others.
Next the brother visited the chef. He told the chef to make food for the people not just his own likings. To this the chef responded fondly. The chef asked the brother if he wanted to be his personal food taster and the brother declined for he had one more answer to deliver.
Finally, the brother found the assassin. He told the assassin to take a contract out on a fool. To this the assassin asked for the brother to sign a contract. The brother did this without reading it.
Later that night the assassin killed the brother while he slept with a snipper. The brother died.

Author notes: the original story a poor brother set out for his luck after speaking to his rich brothers’ luck. He ran across several people and told them he would ask his luck what to do in their situations. He found his luck and it responded to each situation. Then he went to each person with the answer and they all offered half their rewards for the answers, but he foolishly declined them. Finally, he answered a wolfs question and the wolf tricked him for he was a fool and ate him. Very odd story and that why I wanted to rewrite it.

bibliography: source story and author: The Man Who Went to Wake His Luck translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer

Reading Notes: Myth-Folklore Unit: Persian Tales, Part b

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The story that seems the most interesting to me was “The Man Who Went to Wake His Luck”. There are many things I can do to this story to make it better un my own way. First, I would modernize some of the aspect of the story such as making his brother a business man rather than a horse farmer. From there I would make his luck into an accountant that keeps his books strait. Then I would tell have the man face different people based out of the modern business world. I would first have him see a man trying to open a new business. After speaking to his luck, the solution for them man will be to get a loan from a bank. He would ask me to be his partner. The next person he would see is a restaurant owner not getting any customers. After speaking to his luck, the solution would be to create food the customers like not just himself. He would ask me to be his food taster. Then I would come across a man sharply dresses man. He would say ask why my assassins’ business is not getting off. After speaking to luck. The solution was to get a contract on a fool so that you show you have the skills to perform. He asks me to give him 500 dollars and I would. That night he kills me while I sleep and make it look like and accident. This is how I would adjust the story and make it my own.
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bibliography: Persian Tales translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer

Tuesday, September 25, 2018

Reading Notes: Myth-Folklore Unit: Persian Tales, Part A


Ghost that Haunts 
image by Fer Gregory 

The story that peaked my interest in wanting to rewrite was from part A was “The Boy Who Became a Bulbul. I like this story for there is so much more that could be done with it. When writing my own version of the story I would keep the intro like the original story where the son and father have a competition of some sort and the father cheats in the end. After the father kills the son I would have cut off the head still and try to feed the meat to the sister. After this I would start to really change things up. I would have the sister bury the remains of the brother near a haunted cemetery so that I would be able to haunt my father and stepmother. This iswhere I would really deviate from the original story. I would take a revenge on my parents starting with my stepmother who originally came up with the competition by taking over a bird and having it sing to her most beautifully. It will cause her to want to hear it again but when she says that I would make her close her eyes and swiftly sow her mouth and eyes shut. This would be revenge for trying to feed me to my sister and coming up with the competition. Next, I would haunt the father and kill him for cheating me in some way. There are many ways I could do this. Far too many to write down. I am set on how to handle the stepmother. To finally end with a somewhat happy ending I would reward the sister for being a good sister. This would be my plan if I want to rewrite this story.


bibliography: Persian Tales by translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer