mountain Lion By Wikipedia
There was
once a couple who live in the mountains. They lived in a log cabin midway up a
mountain. There was a general store about ten miles from where they lived. The
would go there to get basic essential such as spices and tools. The way they got
their food is the husband would go hunting. Once a week and bring home a dear, bear,
or several small animals.
One day
while out hunting the husband killed a mountain lion that was particularly aggressive.
After killing it he notices why. It was protecting a single cub. Knowing he had
already killed one thing that day he did not have the heart to kill another, so
he decided to take the mountain lion cub back to his wife. When she saw it, she
was so happy and decided to adopt and raise it as her own.
The cub
started out so small and was easy to raise at first but after a while it
started to grow. When she first had the cub, it would play with paper towel tubes
but after a while it became to big. So, she got it scratching post but after a
while it became to big and destroyed it. So, she made the now full-sized lion
play with the trees outside. She would scratch and tear at the trees, but they
were old, big and sturdy, so o could not destroy them.
After a
while the husband ask the wife if he could take it hunting for it would be a great
companion. The wife agreed. After taking the mountain lion one time they realized
how good of a hunter she was. So, to make use of it the husband would constantly
take her hunting with him. Finally, after a while the mountain lion would go
out and hunt on it own and bring back food to the couple.
They lived
happily with their lioness companion for a while. It all changed one day when it
came home with a body. The husband immediately recognized the body was of the general
store. He went to investigated what had happened. When he was down there he figured
out the store owner had seen the mountain lion and tried to kill it. He could
tell the lion only killed him in self-defense. He went back home and explained
this to his wife and they sat down and discussed a decision.
They decided to report the store owner as missing and they
needed to let go of the mountain lion. So, they did just this. The decided to put
a collar on the lion with a blank tag in hopes people would leave it alone. The
couple drove deep into the woods, so that they let the lion go away from civilization.
They cried as they told it to leave but the lion understood and ran off into
the woods.
To this
day people who travel deep into the wood will say they see a mountain lion with
a collar, but it will not attack them for some reason. The husband and wife
never saw the mountain lion again though.
Authors notes: the
original story “The Woman Who had a Bear as a Foster-Son” was about an eskimo
woman who fostered a bear cub that grew up and would hunt with the men. I changed
the people from eskimos and the cub to a bear but kept the story similar. Her bear
brought a dead man who challenged to kill the bear and she decided to let it go
after that. In my story the lion killed the store owner and brought them home. The
eskimo let he bear go in the end and I did the same with my story.
Bibliography: The Woman Who had a Bear as a Foster-Son by Knud Rasmussen
Hi Nick,
ReplyDeleteThis story pulled on my heart strings! Today this is a really big debate on whether people should adopt and have wild animals as pets. Since the wild instinct is ingrained into the animal's genes. What are your views on the matter? Also did the wife and husband view the animal differently? It seems like the mom was more caring but the father saw him as a tool.
Hi, Nick! That story definitely made me emotional! I am a huge animal lover and I will give a home to any animal that needs it, but I do believe that wild animals should be able to live in the wild if they are healthy enough to do so. I think that your story was very well written and it had a lot of good details and depth in it. Overall, I think you did a wonderful job and I look forward to reading more from you in the future! Have a great semester!
ReplyDeleteHi Nick, I thought you wrote this story very well! Your author's note was very clear in how you were able to make your own story from the original too. I think what I like most about your story is that it could honestly be real. A lot of people take in wild animals into a domesticated lifestyle, but that just is not the kind of life that is meant for them. Good job with this story!
ReplyDeleteHi Nick! I like how you decided to change your story in those little ways. I hadn't read the original one so your author's not was helpful. This story made me really invested in your characters and was good at making your reader feel emotional. I was so sad they ended up letting the mountain lion go but I know it must've been for the best.
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