The feedback from other students in the class are useful in seeing the way I could adjust my writings. I have tries to change the way I write with the advice given through the first half of the semester. I have tried to listen to what others say without taking any of the comments as attacks but as constructive criticism. When leaving comments for others I try to leave the most constructive comments that I can. I have seen the way other people write and try to adjust my writings throughout the semester for I see that some of the ways others write are superior to my own. I have gained more from seeing the way others write then from the comments they leave me. I feel like the introductions to other is a nice short way to get an introduction to the others in the class. I believe this is something that is good for the class because its online and we never physically had met each other. I believe that I am doing the best in the feedback to other students in the class and the other are doing their best for me. We all just need to keep the spirits up and keep moving forward.
This images speaks to me. It shows that we are human and are not. We do things imperfectly so that we can correct with the help of other. This is why I chose this image.
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