Week 12 Story:The forbidden Love

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There was once a lady name Jess, who lived in New York City, and who fell for a hansom rich looking guy. This guys name was Jacob. Jacob always took Jess on fancy dates though out Manhattan Island. They would always end their dates at Jess’s house though. After many wonderful dates jess started asked if Jacob would like to go to his house after each date, but he would say no. But Jacob would describe his house to her so that she would have an idea of what the house looked like. He even gave her the address. This satisfied her for a while.

One day while knowing Jacob was away on business Jess hoped into a cab and headed to Jacobs house. When she arrived, it was greater than she had ever expected. The house outside was fantastic with gardens of flowers on either side of the yard. She wanted a look at the inside, so she found a window that was open and went to look inside. It was just as Jacob described but she saw a room she had never heard Jacob describe. She opened the door to see inside a room covered in plastic wrap and a table in the middle with medical tools.

                A few moments later she saw head lights pulling up and then the front door started to creak open. She couldn’t make it to the window where she entered before Jacob entered in the house. She hid in a storage closet that had a line of sight on Jacob. She saw him struggling to bring something inside. She finally realized it was a person. She looked really close at the persons face and it was the man she saw on the news the day previous for the murder of three children in a park. The man was struggling, and Jacob punched the man in the face and his teeth went everywhere. Jacob got the man in the mysterious room and closed the door. Jess then waited a few minutes and came out of the closet. She grabbed one of the teeth as proof she was there and as she left, she heard screams of bloody murder come from the room.

                The next day Jess and Jacob had a date. Jess acted normal though the whole date until they reached her home. Once they were inside, she took Jacob to her living room. Then she confronted him about what happen last night. Jacob tried to deny it at first but when she showed him the tooth, he knew he would have to come clean. He told her that he was a man that killed those who raped or murdered others that the law could not catch or got away with it. He said that what he did was wrong and would face judgement one day but until then he would help those who didn’t have help. Jess sat and thought long and hard about what she had just been told. She then decided that she wasn’t going to do anything. She loved Jacob and what he did was technically for the good of the people. She made a few rules for Jacob though. She said that he was to hold no more secrets and they were to spend time at his house. He agreed to this.

                In the end the Jacob continued what he did, and Jess knew what he was doing. They ended up getting married and moving into Jacobs house. They had three kids together. Jess made Jacob move his so-called hobby to outside for the children’s sake. They ended up living happily ever after.

Authors notes: The original story was “Mr. Fox”. There was a maiden in love with the man Mr. Fox, but they never went to his castle. I kept this part of the story. One day the maiden when to his castle and found a room full of bodies. She also saw Mr. Fox come home and cut off the hand of a dead person he was dragging inside. She took the hand and went home. I did this but with a twist on the room and used teeth. When Mr. Fox Visited the maiden confronted him and he denied it but when she show him the hand her brother and her killed him. I changed the end to where she accepts him to put a dark twist in the story.

Bibliography: Mr. Fox by Joseph Jacobs