Saturday, November 24, 2018

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit:Russian Folktales, Part B



The story that stood out to me this week was “The dog and the Corpse”. I Know exactly how I am going to rewrite this story. I will keep to the plot till the end, but it will be two people instead of a dog and a person. They will both be out for a late-night jog and they will be passing a cemetery and their will be a corpse that attacks them. One friend will fend it off while the other runs off. the one who fight will get away and be very angry at his friend and hold a grudge. He will then attempt to kill his friend for leaving him and be successful. This is where I change the story. He will try to make it look like and accident. Then his friend will haunt him till he confesses to what he has done. Then he will be sent to an asylum for no one will believe his reasoning for even killing his friend. This is what I plan to do for my version of the story.


Bibliography: Russian Fairy Tales by W. R. S. Ralston

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit:Russian Folktales, Part A



The story that stood out to me this week was “Emilian the Fool”. I loved the idea behind this story on how he is fool that is given luck and gets everything he wishes to happen happens. I would rewrite this story with similar plot where there is a man that everybody takes for a fool and runs across something that gives him luck. He would be taking care of his brothers’ wives and end up with a millionaire’s daughter. I like to keep happy ending, but I would also include something so that you know what happens to his brothers and wives for the original story had no such part. This is what I would do if I was to rewrite this story and make it my own.


Bibliography: Russian Fairy Tales by W. R. S. Ralston

Wednesday, November 14, 2018

Week 13 Story: Three Wasted Wishes


Fairy by Peter

There once lived a man who lived in New York. He was on a business trip for his job. This was nothing out of the ordinary for the man. But this trip will end up being the most interesting he will ever have. It starts out with him going about his normal business when he takes these trips for his company. He starts to head home after business has ben conducted and was on a crowded subway platform. He is waiting for the train in subway so that he may make his way to the airport. The train stated to arrive on the platform but instead of slowing down it passes at full speed and the lights start to flicker. As the train passed, in front of him appears a fairy. Nobody else was around. The fairy spoke and told the man he had been chosen for the chance to have three wishes and was told to use them wisely. Then the lights flickered, and the fairy disappeared, and the man was in a crowded subway platform again.
                He made his way home after this event confused and shrugging it off as if had never happened. He arrived back at his home in New York. He came home to his roommate watching tv next to a fire place and sat down. He was watching a show that was showing the most expensive pizza in New York. The pizza was two thousand dollars and had gold flakes on it. The man wished he could try the pizza. Then suddenly, a pizza came down the chimney. The roommate and man open the box to find the pizza they saw on TV and both wondered how then the man remembered what happened on the subway.
                He explained the whole situation to his friend. He said that it really had happened, but his friend refused to believe him. He also ridiculed him for coming up with the story. He asked his friend to stop ridiculing him, but he wouldn’t. he then wished that his friend would just shut up. Suddenly, his friend couldn’t speak. He told his friend that he gets this for ridiculing him.
The friend went to the doctor the next day to see if they could so anything. The doctors were completely stumped. They sent the roommate home with no success. So finally, the roommate went to the man and asked if he would use his third wish to give him his voice back. He wrote on a piece of paper he would believe his story if it came back. So the man wished for his voice to come back and it did. After this the friend believed what had happened. But they both realized through their squabbling that they had wasted three wishes on things that were almost pointless. They learned to never argue over something so obscure but serious at the same time again.

Authors notes: The original story was “the Three Wishes”. In this story a man was a lumber collector who chopped trees and before he chopped down a tree a fairy appears before him and told him he had three wishes. He went home confused and dazed not believing it. Then while at home he wished for black pudding while his wife cooks and it falls out of a fire place. Then the man tries to explain it to his wife and she doesn’t believe him. He wishes his nose to smell the black pudding but they cannot get his nose off of it so he wishes his nose free. This is what I based my story off.


Bibliography: Three Wishes By Jacob Joseph

Tuesday, November 13, 2018

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: More English Tales , Part B

Bagpipes by Wikipedia 

The story that caught my eye this week was “The Little Bull calf”. I am going to tell story in my own way. I am going to make it where the boy owned a goat or sheep. He will have his parents die and become very poor. He will be living in Scotland. His goat will tell him to kill him and make a bag pipe out of his remains. The boy will become a master of the instrument. Then the king will call up anyone who can master the instrument to come play for him. He will choose who ever can play it the best will take his daughters hand in marriage. This is what I plan to write for this story.

Bibliography: More English Tales by Joseph Jacobs

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: More English Tales , Part A




The story that caught my eye this week was “The Three Wishes”. I would love to rewrite this story with my own touch. I am going to keep the stories plot the same where a man is told he has three wishes but does not believe it. I will apply it to a modern situation where maybe he comes home from a business trip rather than from the woods. He will meet the fairy in a sub way who gives him the wishes. He will go to his home and wish something ridiculous that doesn’t really mean anything and realize it happens. I will also stick it where his friend see it and doesn’t believe it. He will end up wishing for his friend to shut up then it will happen. He will have to waste his finally wish to undo this. This would be my plan for this story.


Bibliography: More English Tales by Joseph Jacobs

Tuesday, November 6, 2018

Week 12 Story:The forbidden Love

bloody by Blogspot


There was once a lady name Jess, who lived in New York City, and who fell for a hansom rich looking guy. This guys name was Jacob. Jacob always took Jess on fancy dates though out Manhattan Island. They would always end their dates at Jess’s house though. After many wonderful dates jess started asked if Jacob would like to go to his house after each date, but he would say no. But Jacob would describe his house to her so that she would have an idea of what the house looked like. He even gave her the address. This satisfied her for a while.
One day while knowing Jacob was away on business Jess hoped into a cab and headed to Jacobs house. When she arrived, it was greater than she had ever expected. The house outside was fantastic with gardens of flowers on either side of the yard. She wanted a look at the inside, so she found a window that was open and went to look inside. It was just as Jacob described but she saw a room she had never heard Jacob describe. She opened the door to see inside a room covered in plastic wrap and a table in the middle with medical tools.
                A few moments later she saw head lights pulling up and then the front door started to creak open. She couldn’t make it to the window where she entered before Jacob entered in the house. She hid in a storage closet that had a line of sight on Jacob. She saw him struggling to bring something inside. She finally realized it was a person. She looked really close at the persons face and it was the man she saw on the news the day previous for the murder of three children in a park. The man was struggling, and Jacob punched the man in the face and his teeth went everywhere. Jacob got the man in the mysterious room and closed the door. Jess then waited a few minutes and came out of the closet. She grabbed one of the teeth as proof she was there and as she left, she heard screams of bloody murder come from the room.
                The next day Jess and Jacob had a date. Jess acted normal though the whole date until they reached her home. Once they were inside, she took Jacob to her living room. Then she confronted him about what happen last night. Jacob tried to deny it at first but when she showed him the tooth, he knew he would have to come clean. He told her that he was a man that killed those who raped or murdered others that the law could not catch or got away with it. He said that what he did was wrong and would face judgement one day but until then he would help those who didn’t have help. Jess sat and thought long and hard about what she had just been told. She then decided that she wasn’t going to do anything. She loved Jacob and what he did was technically for the good of the people. She made a few rules for Jacob though. She said that he was to hold no more secrets and they were to spend time at his house. He agreed to this.
                In the end the Jacob continued what he did, and Jess knew what he was doing. They ended up getting married and moving into Jacobs house. They had three kids together. Jess made Jacob move his so-called hobby to outside for the children’s sake. They ended up living happily ever after.

Authors notes: The original story was “Mr. Fox”. There was a maiden in love with the man Mr. Fox, but they never went to his castle. I kept this part of the story. One day the maiden when to his castle and found a room full of bodies. She also saw Mr. Fox come home and cut off the hand of a dead person he was dragging inside. She took the hand and went home. I did this but with a twist on the room and used teeth. When Mr. Fox Visited the maiden confronted him and he denied it but when she show him the hand her brother and her killed him. I changed the end to where she accepts him to put a dark twist in the story.


Bibliography: Mr. Fox by Joseph Jacobs

Monday, November 5, 2018

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit:English Fairy Tales , Part B


bloody by Blogspot



The story that caught my eyes was “Mr. Fox”. I liked this story for it is a dark tale of a love betrayed with out the lover who was betrayed dying in the end. I want to rewrite this story with an even darker twist though. I want to inter mix the story with the idea of an old show I never finished but had a great concept. I want to make the maiden fall in love with a murderer who kills murderer and people who have done wrong. I would also make the setting a little more modern to accompany with the idea. Also the dark twist would be that the maiden still accepts him for what he is and they live happily ever after. This would be my plan for my story.


Bibliography: English Fairy Tales by Joseph Jacobs

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit:English Fairy Tales , Part A


The story that caught my eyes was two today. They were “The Old Woman and Her Pig” and “The Master and His Pupil”. I loved both of these stories. If were to rewrite the first one I would keep it basically the same but with different inputs. This can be very fun because each piece of the story leads to another. I would more than likely start out with a sack of potato that an old man needs help getting up stairs and build on the story from this point. Now second story would also be fun. I would start of with a great and powerful wizard that is trying to teach a pupil the ways of magic. One day ignoring the rules of the wizard the pupil would practice magic while the wizard was not around and loose control of everything. I almost want to write like Fantasia with Mickey, but I will make my own story instead. This is my plan for these stories if I so choose to use them.


Bibliography: English Fairy Tales by Joseph Jacobs

Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Story Week 11: A Man and His Rabbits


There was once a man roaming the plains. He was hungry and willing to kill anything to eat even if It was a cute fuzzy rabbit. He soon came upon a burrow in the middle of the plains. He looked to see if anything was inside. He soon realized there was nothing inside. He stepped on the entrance and making the burrow inaccessible. He sat and waited until what lived in the burrow came home.
                Soon a family of rabbits came looking for their home and saw the man sitting at the entrance. The man explained to the rabbits that he had accidentally stepped on the entrance. He told them he would help take care of them this evening and help to build a new burrow tomorrow. The rabbits agreed to his generosity.
                The man soon got a fire going with the grass and twigs he could find around him. While gathering these items he also found a rock that he would use to strike the rabbits. While the fire the fire was going the rabbits would dance around it and so would the man. He would occasionally hit one of the rabbits in the head with the rock and then explain that the rabbit must be tuckered out but should wake in the morning. He did this until there was one rabbit left. This rabbit noticed the rock and tried to run but the man threw the rock this time and hit it.
                The man after killing all the rabbits skinned them and left their meat to dry out in a nearby tree. He returned to his fire and fell asleep. Later in the evening a few vultures saw the meat hanging in the tree and came to take the meat. They took all the meat except and especially small piece from the smallest rabbit.
                The next morning the man awoke and went to get his meat. He climbed the tree and the first piece he saw was the smallest piece and he threw it down thinking it was to small to care about. he continued to climb until he realized all his meat was gone. He soon climbed down to find the small piece he threw in the dirt. It was all covered in dirt, but the man was starving and ate the piece whole.
Author notes : I made this story for “Coyote Kills Prairie Dogs”. I change coyote to a man and I changed Prairie dogs to rabbits. It the story coyote told the prairie dogs to lock their doors so when they realized he was killing them they couldn’t go back home. I made it where the man made no entrance to their home and they had to follow him. In both stories the weapon of choice is a rock. In the original the prairie dogs realize their being killed but have nowhere to run but in mine they are all killed until one is left. In the original and mine the meat get stolen except for the smallest piece which get tossed aside and then they are forced to eat it because that is all that is left.


bibliography: Coyote Kills the Prairie Dogs By P. E. Goddard

Tuesday, October 30, 2018

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Apache Tales, Part B


The story that caught my eye today was “Coyote Kills the Prairie Dogs”. This one caught my eye because in all the stories I read coyote missed out on his chance at something. In this one he misses out at a meal chance. When I rewrite this story, I would make the coyote a man that deceives some rabbits. I would have him destroy the entrance to their burrow. But then be nice and offer to take care of them for an evening until the next day where they could make a new burrow. Then I would have him make a fire and kill them while they danced and celebrated his help. When they realize he is not helping they would have nowhere to go. I would then have the man cook them and hang them high in a tree while he slept the rest of the night away. Then I would have a vulture come and take all the rabbit’s meat except the smallest one. The next morning the man would reach up for the meat and find that one and throw it away saying its to small. But after realizing the meat was all gone he would have to eat the small one he threw in the dirt.

Bibliography: Apache Tales by P. E. Godard

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Apache Tales, Part A

creature from wiki  


The story that caught my eye today was “the swallowing monster”. This story seemed short and quick, so I believe I can do more with it. I will start my story with people who are out on a hunting trip. Then I will give the experience of seeing the monster for the first time and give details of what it looked like. Then I will explain their escape plan. After this I will explain how their escape plan works out. I m will end the story different than how it is written. I will either make it to where all the people escape for the creature or I will make it to where there is an eerie cliff hanger at the end. This is my plans for this story if I write it.  

Bibliography: Apache Tales by P. E. Godard

Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Week 10 Story: The Mountain Lion Cub


               
mountain Lion By Wikipedia 


                There was once a couple who live in the mountains. They lived in a log cabin midway up a mountain. There was a general store about ten miles from where they lived. The would go there to get basic essential such as spices and tools. The way they got their food is the husband would go hunting. Once a week and bring home a dear, bear, or several small animals.
                One day while out hunting the husband killed a mountain lion that was particularly aggressive. After killing it he notices why. It was protecting a single cub. Knowing he had already killed one thing that day he did not have the heart to kill another, so he decided to take the mountain lion cub back to his wife. When she saw it, she was so happy and decided to adopt and raise it as her own.
                The cub started out so small and was easy to raise at first but after a while it started to grow. When she first had the cub, it would play with paper towel tubes but after a while it became to big. So, she got it scratching post but after a while it became to big and destroyed it. So, she made the now full-sized lion play with the trees outside. She would scratch and tear at the trees, but they were old, big and sturdy, so o could not destroy them.
                After a while the husband ask the wife if he could take it hunting for it would be a great companion. The wife agreed. After taking the mountain lion one time they realized how good of a hunter she was. So, to make use of it the husband would constantly take her hunting with him. Finally, after a while the mountain lion would go out and hunt on it own and bring back food to the couple.
                They lived happily with their lioness companion for a while. It all changed one day when it came home with a body. The husband immediately recognized the body was of the general store. He went to investigated what had happened. When he was down there he figured out the store owner had seen the mountain lion and tried to kill it. He could tell the lion only killed him in self-defense. He went back home and explained this to his wife and they sat down and discussed a decision.
They decided to report the store owner as missing and they needed to let go of the mountain lion. So, they did just this. The decided to put a collar on the lion with a blank tag in hopes people would leave it alone. The couple drove deep into the woods, so that they let the lion go away from civilization. They cried as they told it to leave but the lion understood and ran off into the woods.
                To this day people who travel deep into the wood will say they see a mountain lion with a collar, but it will not attack them for some reason. The husband and wife never saw the mountain lion again though.
 Authors notes: the original story “The Woman Who had a Bear as a Foster-Son” was about an eskimo woman who fostered a bear cub that grew up and would hunt with the men. I changed the people from eskimos and the cub to a bear but kept the story similar. Her bear brought a dead man who challenged to kill the bear and she decided to let it go after that. In my story the lion killed the store owner and brought them home. The eskimo let he bear go in the end and I did the same with my story.


Bibliography: The Woman Who had a Bear as a Foster-Son by Knud Rasmussen

Tuesday, October 23, 2018

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Eskimo Folk Tales , Part B


Money From Istock



The story I loved today was “Papik, Who Killed His Wife's Brother”. This was a fantastic story fill with envy then fear and finally death. I would love to rewrite this story with my own touch. I would set it in the big city. I would make it to where the person who has envy is because of a relatives money. Then I would have him kill the relative to gain an inheritance. I would change it up where there is no ghost but the Peron who had envy thinks there is one. He would tear himself apart and in one of his attempts to flee for his life accidentally kill himself. The lesson would be to not kill someone you know and then regret it after.


Bibliography:  Papik, Who Killed His Wife's Brother by Knud Rasmussen

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Eskimo Folk Tales , Part A

mountain Lion By Wikipedia 

The story I found most intriguing this week was "The Woman Who had a Bear as a Foster-Son". I loved this story for the reason of I had a great thoughts of how i could make it my own. I have always wanted a mountain lion of my own but knowing they are to Dangerous but nothing stops me from writing a story about it. I would change the setting to in the mountains. I would have a husband bring home a kitten that turns into a mountain lion when grown up.I would still stick to the original ending where it is just to big and I have to let it go. This is a story I really want to write and have been waiting for the opportune time.

Bibliography: The Woman Who had a Bear as a Foster-Son by Knud Rasmussen

Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Week 9 Story: The Lonely Centaur



There was once a girl who lived in big city full of skyscrapers. Out of all these skyscrapers one was fifty stories taller than any of the others. This one was in the dead in the middle of the city and stood out. One day the girl was out in her backyard messing with her garden when a freak storm swooped in out of nowhere and picked up the girl. Being very scared the girl kept her eyes shut the whole time.
When the storm disappeared, and the girl opened her eyes she found herself at the top of the cities tallest sky scraper. She looked around and saw a man approach her that was also on the roof. He asked her if she would marry him and she said no. The man said that she would be on the roof until she said yes. He gave her some clothes, food, and showed her where there was a garden that she could work in if she felt like it. Then he climbed down a ladder on the side of the building to the story below. He removed the ladder so that the girl would not escape.
For the next few days the man returned by putting the ladder back and brought the girl food. Then he would ask if she had changed her mind and she kept saying no.
One day in hopes that someone would notice her on the roof the girl threw her original clothes over the edge hoping someone notice where it came from. She lucked out for the person who saw her clothes was her brother. Wondering where the clothes came from the brother went home to think that evening.
The next day the man did his normal routine but forgot to take down the ladder. As soon as the girl noticed this she climbed down to a door that was locked. The door had a small window in it though. She looked through it and to her surprise the man was on the other side but changing into something. At the end of the transformation she saw that he was a centaur with wings. She banged on the door to get his attention.
He came over with fear for she had seen what he truly was. He opened the door and told her that she was free. She did not move though. She beckoned the centaur to the roof. When up on the roof they talked.  there she discovered that he was lonely and thought this was the best way to get her to love him. She said what he did was wrong but was willing to start things off with him slowly and didn’t care what he was. She wanted to make things work out for she thought he was a beautiful creature that deserved love.
Right after they finished talking the girls brother showed up on the roof. Seeing the creature his first thought was to kill the creature with the gun he kept on him. Before he could get a shot off the girl jumped in front of the brother and the centaur. She explained that he was a misunderstood creature that made a mistake and had not harmed her. After hearing this the brother put the gun away. He was just happy his sister was safe.
A couple of days after the event the brother and sister invited the centaur to live with them. Since they both knew what he was the centaur was able to take his true form in their home. After many months together, the girl decided to marry the centaur since she had finally had the chance to properly get to know him. Form there they all lived happily ever after.

Authors note: The original story was The Maiden Who Was Stolen Away. In that story a girl was taken to the top of a tall pagoda. She had a man telling her to marry him or be locked up at the top. After a while she threw her clothes off and a passerby took the clothes to her brother because they recognized them as hers. Before her brother arrived to get her the girl figured out the man was an ogre. When the bother came for his sister he threw and ax at the ogre and cut off its arm. Then he saved his sister. My story ended much different and had different creature.


BibliographyThe Chinese Fairy Book, ed. by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens 

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Chinese Fairy Tales , Part B


The story that caught my eye today was The Maiden Who was Stolen Away. this is simple tale and i want to make it my own. I will make the story take place in modern city in america rather than in a city china. I would keep the story the same where a girl is in her yard then swept away by a freak storm. She will wait at the top of a skyscraper taller than any other in the city by far. I will change the ending and the creature though. I will make it a happy ending for all rather than kill the creature. In my version the creature will be a centaur with wings. I will have the brother try to kill the creature but in the end the girl fall in love with the centaur and save it from being killed. This is what I plan to do with the story.

BibliographyThe Chinese Fairy Book, ed. by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens 

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Chinese Fairy Tales , Part A

business suit by Gentlemanstalor

The story that caught my eye this week was Why Cats and Dogs are Enemies. I loved this story for there are so many direction that i could take it. I as always will modernize the story for it something i like to do to make the story more relate-able. I think I will go in the direction of a mathematician and a business man. I will make the business man gain all the reward like at the end of the old story while the mathematician gets fired at the end. I think I will make it to where they seek out a way to save a business and are successful but the business man get all the credit as previously stated. I know there is not a whole lot of information here but I know the story will come together.

Bibliography: The Chinese Fairy Book, ed. by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens 

Thursday, October 11, 2018

Week 8 Progress

I think that I am making progress in the class at a steady healthy. I have set a weekly routine that allows me to get done early in the week or finish up last minute if needed. I give my self leeway for all of the assignments. I believe for my first blog things are going well and it is as I want it to be. I like being able to write my stories every week and am proud of the stories that I write. Everything seems to be going well in the class so far for me and I do not want to change my routine for it has no issues.
The weekend is a metaphor for winter break and I need to stay strong.
Image by Pinterest

Wednesday, October 10, 2018

Week 8 Comments and Feedback

The feedback from other students in the class are useful in seeing the way I could adjust my writings. I have tries to change the way I write with the advice given through the first half of the semester. I have tried to listen to what others say without taking any of the comments as attacks but as constructive criticism. When leaving comments for others I try to leave the most constructive comments that I can. I have seen the way other people write and try to adjust my writings throughout the semester for I see that some of the ways others write are superior to my own. I have gained more from seeing the way others write then from the comments they leave me. I feel like the introductions to other is a nice short way to get an introduction to the others in the class. I believe this is something that is good for the class because its online and we never physically had met each other. I believe that I am doing the best in the feedback to other students in the class and the other are doing their best for me. We all just need to keep the spirits up and keep moving forward. 
This images speaks to me. It shows that we are human and are not. We do things imperfectly so that we can correct with the help of other. This is why I chose this image.

image by Growthmindset 

Tuesday, October 9, 2018

Week 8 Reading and Writing

My thoughts so far on the writings that I have done have been up to par for my capable skills. I have noticed a trend that i like to modernize most of the stories that I rewrite. I believe there is nothing wrong with this.though for i think my stories stand out and are interesting. I have also believe my blog style stands out from others in the class, for none of the others look like mine. I am also happy with its layout for it is simple to navigate. I am also happy with my story set up. The site is simple but it works for the story I am telling. i have noticed that my proof reading skill need to be worked on for I make lots of mistakes that I miss even when I reread the stories.This is something I will work on. I have made myself proud so far and want to continue with my progress and write great stories.
Satan in the ninth level of hell
Image site: image by Dave Melvin
This has been my favorite image so far because it has a powerful meaning for my story. It is the image of Satan of the ninth level of hell which is the final thing Dante experiences in the Inferno. It also looks great. So This is why it is my favorite.

Wednesday, October 3, 2018

Week 7 Story: The Cable Mans Dreams

Larry the Cable Guy
Image by Steve Snowden 

There was once a man who cable installer. He was happy with his job and he would always do the best job possible. Then one day he had to do an install at a tri level mansion. Seeing everything that was in this house made the cable installer sad. He finished the job and left. Though this time when he left the job he felt unsatisfied with himself. He wished he had all the riches that the man who owned the house did. Then right after he thought this a voice in his head said,” Your wish is my command.”
Later that evening he arrived home in shock. His small one-bedroom house had turned into a tri level mansion. He loved it. Seeing that he had become rich he quite his job and started a new life. He felt unsatisfied with his new life style after a while though. He wanted to do more. He was watching T.V. one day and saw the CEO of a company giving a speech and showing power over the company. The man than though to himself that he wished he was a CEO. Once again, a voice came over and said,” Your wish is my command.”
The next day the man awoke to being named the CEO of a new business. He did not abuse his power while in the is position but like with be rich he soon became bored. Now the man had a taste of power he wished for more so that he could control nature. He thought to himself that he was the moon so he could control the oceans. Once again, a voice came over and said,” Your wish is my command.”
The man then became the moon. He controlled all the waves of the ocean. But as before he became bored but also, he was tired of having so much power. He saw fish every day in the ocean and thought their lives were simple. So, he thought to himself that he wanted to be a fish in the sea. Once again, a voice came over and said,” Your wish is my command.
The man loved being a fish with nothing to do and freedom to swim around all day. One day though the man got caught in a fishing net and was being taken to a fish cannery. Before he dies as a fish the man thought to himself he wanted to be a cable man again. From that day on the man appreciated everything that he had and never wished for anything to complex again.


Author notes: The original story is “The Stonecutter”. It the story he first wishes for the riches of a wealthy person and their lifestyle. Then he wishes that he could be a prince. Then he wishes that he could be the sun. Then he wishes he could be a stone and a stonecutter came along to cut him and he wishes to be a man again and realized his stonecutter life was just fine even if he didn’t have it all.

bibliography: source story and author: The Stonecutter by Andrew Lang 

Reading Notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Japanese Fairy Tales (Lang) , Part A


Stone image by NA

The story this week that intrigued me was the story “The stone cutter”. This story is simple and nice. It teaches the lesson that you don’t always need more than you already have. Just be happy with what you have. To make the story my own I would change it in a few ways. I would first add a modern touch. Along with the modern touch I would add multiple different situation to story to keep the same flow with the modern touch. I would make the man an accountant. Then I would make him wish he was rich. After this I would make him wish he was the CEO of a company. Then I would make him wish he was the moon. Then I would have him wish that he was a fish. Then finally make him a man again. It simple changes but these changes would make the story my own.


Bibliography: Japanese Fairy Tales Retold by Andrew Lang 

Wednesday, September 26, 2018

Week 6 Story: The Man Who Looked for His Luck

assassin


There once were two brothers. One of them was a successful business man while the other was barely making it by, paycheck to paycheck. One day while visiting the office building his brother works in looking for a job he stopped by to see his brother in his office. When he opened the door to the office he saw a man sitting there doing paper work that was not his brother. He has asked, “Who are you?”
The man relied “I am your brother luck.”
Then the brother asked, “If you are my brother luck, what are you doing here?”
He responded, “I do your brother harder paper work to keep him ahead in the game of business.”
The brother thought a moment then ask, “Where his luck was?”
To this he responded, “He is resting in a hotel.”
The man demanded to know where the hotel was, and the luck told him where the hotel was. The brother set off to find his luck. On his way he cam across a man crying. He inquired why the man was crying. The man explained that he did not have enough money to open his business. So the brother told the man once he finds his luck he will ask a way to get the money.
Next the brother came across a chef siting in front of his restaurant looking sad. He asked the chef why he was sad. The chef replied that he had not had a customer in many days. Thinking about this the brother said he would inquire his luck on why this was.
Along the way the brother saw a man in a black suit. He looked frustrated and the brother asked why? The man explained his assassin’s business was not taking off. To this the brother responded I will ask my luck for you.
Finally, he found the hotel and entered to find his luck sleeping on a couch. He woke his luck. He asked why he was not with him and it replied that he was not to wake for a few more years. The luck asked him to leave until then, but the brother wouldn’t until he answered his questions about the situation of the men he met along the way.
To this the luck responded, “For the man who wants a business tell him to get a loan. For the chef, tell him to make food people like not just food that he liked. Finally, for the assassin, tell him to take a contract out on a fool to gain credit.”
After hearing these answers, the brother left his luck. First, he inquires the man who wanted to open a business. He told him to get a loan from a bank. The man thanked the brother and asked if he would be his partner, but the brother declined for he had answers for others.
Next the brother visited the chef. He told the chef to make food for the people not just his own likings. To this the chef responded fondly. The chef asked the brother if he wanted to be his personal food taster and the brother declined for he had one more answer to deliver.
Finally, the brother found the assassin. He told the assassin to take a contract out on a fool. To this the assassin asked for the brother to sign a contract. The brother did this without reading it.
Later that night the assassin killed the brother while he slept with a snipper. The brother died.

Author notes: the original story a poor brother set out for his luck after speaking to his rich brothers’ luck. He ran across several people and told them he would ask his luck what to do in their situations. He found his luck and it responded to each situation. Then he went to each person with the answer and they all offered half their rewards for the answers, but he foolishly declined them. Finally, he answered a wolfs question and the wolf tricked him for he was a fool and ate him. Very odd story and that why I wanted to rewrite it.

bibliography: source story and author: The Man Who Went to Wake His Luck translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer

Reading Notes: Myth-Folklore Unit: Persian Tales, Part b

assassin

The story that seems the most interesting to me was “The Man Who Went to Wake His Luck”. There are many things I can do to this story to make it better un my own way. First, I would modernize some of the aspect of the story such as making his brother a business man rather than a horse farmer. From there I would make his luck into an accountant that keeps his books strait. Then I would tell have the man face different people based out of the modern business world. I would first have him see a man trying to open a new business. After speaking to his luck, the solution for them man will be to get a loan from a bank. He would ask me to be his partner. The next person he would see is a restaurant owner not getting any customers. After speaking to his luck, the solution would be to create food the customers like not just himself. He would ask me to be his food taster. Then I would come across a man sharply dresses man. He would say ask why my assassins’ business is not getting off. After speaking to luck. The solution was to get a contract on a fool so that you show you have the skills to perform. He asks me to give him 500 dollars and I would. That night he kills me while I sleep and make it look like and accident. This is how I would adjust the story and make it my own.
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bibliography: Persian Tales translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer

Tuesday, September 25, 2018

Reading Notes: Myth-Folklore Unit: Persian Tales, Part A


Ghost that Haunts 
image by Fer Gregory 

The story that peaked my interest in wanting to rewrite was from part A was “The Boy Who Became a Bulbul. I like this story for there is so much more that could be done with it. When writing my own version of the story I would keep the intro like the original story where the son and father have a competition of some sort and the father cheats in the end. After the father kills the son I would have cut off the head still and try to feed the meat to the sister. After this I would start to really change things up. I would have the sister bury the remains of the brother near a haunted cemetery so that I would be able to haunt my father and stepmother. This iswhere I would really deviate from the original story. I would take a revenge on my parents starting with my stepmother who originally came up with the competition by taking over a bird and having it sing to her most beautifully. It will cause her to want to hear it again but when she says that I would make her close her eyes and swiftly sow her mouth and eyes shut. This would be revenge for trying to feed me to my sister and coming up with the competition. Next, I would haunt the father and kill him for cheating me in some way. There are many ways I could do this. Far too many to write down. I am set on how to handle the stepmother. To finally end with a somewhat happy ending I would reward the sister for being a good sister. This would be my plan if I want to rewrite this story.


bibliography: Persian Tales by translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer

Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Week 5 Story: The Ghostly Replacement




Close to a ghost wife
image by Lina Blixt


There once lived a man names Spencer and his wife Angelica . They lived in a small house in the mountains with the man's sister Ashley. The Spencer’s sister was always picky about the women he brought home and knew everything about Angelica before he married her.

One day Angelica went down to a small stream that was near their house. On the way she brushed the side of a ghost that had stumbled across the path she would normally take. The ghost took offense to this and took the form of angelica. The ghost then came up behind Angelica right before she reached the stream and took her to nearby tree and buried her next to it. The ghost buried her alive with a hole to breath, for it wanted to make her suffer for touching it without permission. From here the ghost returned back to the house and took Angelica's position.

The ghost did the normal chores around the house that Angelica used to do but more efficiently. Spencer didn’t notice any difference for he was not there during the day when these things were normally done. Ashley on the other hand noticed for she knew the normal routines of Angelica. She had suspicions that is was not Angelica. So after three days she gave the ghost a task that Angelica could normally not do alone to see if she would do it. The ghost of course did it with ease.
Ashley needed more so later that night when Spencer arrived home she told him what happened. Spencer said that this was impossible but listened to his sister. So that evening they both decided to spy on Angelica cooking dinner, which she had finished early the last three days. When they looked in the kitchen they saw Angelica cooking, but she had six arms.
Without thought Spencer jumped out and yell, ”You are not my wife. Where is my wife.”
The ghost was astonished but did what was asked of it.
The ghost took Spencer and his sister to where it had buried Angelica. When arriving and unearthing Angelica they found her in a state of dehydration but otherwise unharmed. They asked why the ghost had done this to Angelica. The ghost explained that it used to be a housewife and when Angelica brushed it the creature became enraged for it used to have the same lifestyle. It wanted to take her place while Angelica suffered in loneliness as it had.

After hearing this all three of them felt pity for the ghost. So instead of sending it on its way they invited the ghost to come live with them as long as it promised to help with the daily chores. The ghost liked this offer and agreed. After this they all lived as one big happy family in the house.

Author notes: the source story is “The Ghost Wife”. In the story there is a man, his wife, and his mother. The wife goes on a late night walk and ran across the ghost that stuffed her in a tree truck and took her place. The mother notices that the wife was not the same and realized it was a ghost. They call in a exorcist to get rid of the evil. In the end they get the ghost to tell him where his wife is and send the ghost away.



bibliography: source story and author: The Ghost wife by the Rev. Lal Hehari Day

Reading notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Bengali Folktales, part B

Seems fitting for a Ghost Wife 

The story that I found most interesting today was “The Ghostly Wife”. The story itself was short and kind of bland but what makes it fun for me is, It is a story I can spice up and make better in my opinion. I will first change one of the characters. I would change the mother to a sister, for my sister is always judging and females I bring around. I will change what the ghost does with the wife for stuffing her into a tree seems very simple. Burying her and saying that she has no chance of survival seems more appropriate. Yes, I know this is very dark. I will also change some of the other things that are noticed in the story that brings them to the conclusion that she is a ghost. I may also change the ending to where she curses the family or house for she wants to stay. I could also make it to where they live with the live happily with the ghost in the end and the ghost provides them help with the special powers that she has. The story seemed simple but I will give it the set up and plot i think it deserves.

Bibliography:Bengali Folktales by the Rev. Lal Behari Day

Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Reading notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Bengali Folktales, part A

a siren attracting a man
by John William Waterhouse 

The stories presented this week were very interesting. What I have gained from previous weeks is I will choose my favorite part of a story or single story from the reading and give note on what I will do with it from now on.  My favorite this week was The Boy whom Seven Mothers Suckled. The story was easy to read so I will not change the language of the story. I will adjust the story by giving it an actual setting. The original story doesn't really give a setting other than they are in a kingdom and then the boy goes to Rakshasi lands. I would add detail of where the kingdom is and where in the kingdom the scenes of the story take place. The story just used vague detail such as the other side to the ocean. I would say what ocean. I would add detail to keep the setting I would keep the story pretty similar but maybe throw in plot twist. First I would have the boy kill the mother of the Rakshasi to prevent her from taking revenge. I would also maybe make it have a twist of an ending where the king realizes it is his son and helps to kill the rakshasi who had blinded him for so long. I could also change the creature that she is while still keeping the plot in tact. I could make here a siren who eats men that has wooed the king in an enchanting human form. These are the things i would choose to do to make this story my own. If I find a better story in the part b I will adjust the notes to fit that for part b.

Bibliography:Bengali Folktales by the Rev. Lal Behari Day

Friday, September 14, 2018

Comment Wall

Satan in the ninth level of hell
Image site: image by Dave Melvin

extra credit: Reading notes: Dantes Inferno: part B

The inferno 
 Image by di Fruosino

These are a few notes to help me keep track:
The seventh level is violence all kinds whether acts of violence, self violence(suicide), or violence towards god.
The eighth level is full of liars and schemers. To make sure I understood I looked it up and it the level of fraud. Dante reached this level on the back of Greyon (a creature)
From the looks of it the ninth level of hell is treachery and contains Satan himself


I will write the last two parts of my stories using these final 3 levels of hell with some leeway. I may go back and rethink the way I want to set the story up. I think I will make the final level of hell its own story for it contains treachery and Satan making those who committed the greatest treacheries suffer the most. And I may have the eighth and seventh level together. The thing I may have to do is skip a level or two such as purgatory and gluttony level 3. I would mention them but I don't see the best way to fit them into the story. I know I will not stick with many of the original creatures to make the story my own but I also can not include every detailed areas from the original story for it would make it too long. I will put my own modern twists on the features of hell but keep to the original sins that got people there such as lust greed and so on.But with each levels sin I will add modern people who would be there and the modern ways of committing these sins. I will also add creatures of my own for the sins. i want to keep Cerberus in the mention of level 3. So to tally up, I will start my journey, mention the purgatory and traveling through it, then I will describe lust level which is level 2, and mention gluttony because I believe level 3 is just a subcategory of level 4 which is greed and would be described in detail next. These will be the first story. The second will contain detail on level 5 and 6 which are anger or wrath then heretic. The third story will contain levels 7 and 8 which are violence then fraud. To end I will discuss the ninth level which is treachery which contains Satan himself for betraying god.

Bibliography: Dante's Divine Comedy, translated by Tony Kline

Wednesday, September 12, 2018

The dreaded cyclops

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There was once a great man name nicholas. He was a man that even the gods smiled upon. He was on a journey home, by sea, from the great war of troy . He was passing a land that he saw. He had noticed that he and his men were running low on supplies and decided to stop. They brought their boat ashore. When they arrived on the land and they noticed that it was fertile and full of lots of free roaming goats. That nights Nicholas and his men gathered goats and ate their fill.

The next day Nicholas Arose. He grabbed some of his sweetest wine to drink. He set out to look at the land. A little way away from his men he noticed a rock move and many goats leave. After the goats had all left a cyclops the size of fifteen men came out of the cave. Seeing this nicholas returned to his men. He made them all wake up and said, “ The strongest of you men who have no fear come with me.”

Twelve of his men followed. Soon they arrived upon the a cave where the rock had been moved. He and his men entered the cave and waited for the cyclops to come back. The reason he waited is he wanted to speak with the cyclops. He wanted to see if the giant creature was friendly and intelligent or a savage. Later that evening the cyclops arrived and all of the goats that were there also came in with him. Then suddenly after the last goat came it he covered the same with the giant rock. After this the creature saw the nicholas and his men in the cave and then spoke, “he said who has intruded in my cave.”

Nicholas was about to speak but before he could speak the cyclopes said, “It doesn’t matter. I shall eat you.”

Then he grabbed three of the men and gobbled them down quickly. This is when Nicholas realized the creature was intelligent and smart. But nick had a plan to try to outsmart the creature. Sadly the cyclops had ate all but two of his men before he had finished thinking of this plan. Fearing for his last two men he walked over to the giant and said, “Would you like some of this wine I have with me?”

Without even answering the cyclops took the wine and drank it all. Within a 30 minutes the cyclops was completely drunk. At this point Nicholas drew his sword and stabbed the creature’s single eye. It screamed out in pain. Then said, “these creatures are trying to kill me.”

The he removed the rock blocking the cave and told his flock of goats to run. In the chaos of the goats fleeing. Nicholas and his two men ran out. As running a little bit away from the cave, Nicholas Said, “I am Nicholas and I have defeated you foul creature.”

Hearing this the cyclops knew where they were and ran after. Nicholas and his men arrived with the rest of their men. Then they set sail as fast as they could. They left right before the giant arrived. Be full of pride from the escape nicholas turned around and yelled, “you have failed to foil our escape and will now suffer with eternal blindness.”

To hearing this the cyclopes lifted a giant boulder along above his head that he found on the shore and was about to throw it towards where he heard the sound. Then suddenly he slipped and the boulder left his hand and struck his head. The blow killed him instantly. After this Nicholas felt like a king for he believed he defeated the cyclops. From there Nicholas and his men sailed into the sea towards home.


Author's notes: the sources story is from Odyssey. In the story Odysseus and his men were on a journey home from the battle for troy. The came on an island they knew had cyclops. He and his men went into a cave to meet one of the cyclopes while it was out. The creature started to eat his men for his for his meal. Then odysseus tricked the creature and blinded it to save his remaining three men. All they did was blind the creature and it did not die in the end. Only cursed him with the wrath of Poseidon. They also stole his whole flock.


bibliography: source story and author: Homer’s Odyssey by Tony Kline

Reading notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Homer's Odyssey, part B

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As I had stated in my previous post about the Odyssey the language is more difficult to read and I want to tell a story with a more modern flowing language. The second half of the story that was provided had too much information to write a single story within the limits and I would not want to leave out any of the important parts. I also can not think of a way to leave out parts to make it shorter without skipping important plot parts. There were just way too many character ghost that Odysseus spoke to that had been sent to Hades at death. I think I will write my story based off the first encounter of his adventures. I would like to put my own twist on the encountered with the cyclops as I had suggested in my last post. I will either tell the story from the point of view of the cyclopes or tell the story with a few plot changes. The plot changes may be that the cyclopes actually dies or kills himself by accident or change the way that Odysseus escapes with his men. This is the story I plan on telling and how I plan to change it.

Bibliography: Homer's Odyssey, Translated into English by Tony Kline

Monday, September 10, 2018

Reading notes:Myth-Folklore Unit: Homer's Odyssey, part A

Circe By Wright Barker: link

The language of the stories is not terribly difficult to read but it is an aspect I would would change. I would write the story in a more flowing language that does seem to have such a old language tone to it. I could rewrite the part of the story for the giants or Circe’s point of view. If I were to do this, I would make it look like they were not in the wrong but rather they were doing something that is normal and they see no evil in it. I could also do a retelling of the stories with some plot point changes. An example would be in stead of the giant being blinded he is kill in the escape by his own mistake or clumsiness. I could also make it where Odysseus fails and dies. I could also write the story with a modern touch completely changing the plot but keeping the characters the same. There also seemed to be a lot of repetition in the stories, like when Odysseus is mentioned they always say a few lines after that are repeated on multiple occasions. I see no need for this and would leave this out. The story I will right will have have more of a flowing language but keep the same entertaining aspect of the story even if I do a plot change.

Bibliography: Homer's Odyssey, Translated into English by Tony Kline